Water world

Splash! all the water is popping out of the water

T2 week 1 heretaunga rao rao hamako went to flaxmere water would.First we went to do swimming lessons.Swimming is fun and can be relaxing for your body and is exercise.Swimming is healthy for your body and is great for building up your stamina for sport.If you are doing a triathlon it can also power you up.No matter what what sport you do swimming is the best for me.

Next fact about swimming is that when you walk into a swimming place you can smell chlorine filling up the gym like a fire filling a fireplace.When I hop into the pool I feel real warm inside and relaxed. I'm in the hot pool that’s why I feel warm and relaxed and the hot pools are the best pools ever for me.

After that we start to do lessons for swimming and our swimming instructor exclaims “We do freestyle.” Then we did backstroke I had to work on my arms and legs so they had to go faster.

After that we did a fun activity.We had to grab toys in the water we and  were only allowed to grab one. I liked that part because it’s a race and I love races.So I thought I was the first one with most toys but I just clicked it’s everyone!!.

Finally we got changed and went on the bus of nimon and went back to school tired.

mum  

My mum is my favourite person in the world no one else is.     

My mum is kind, caring and stunning.

   She cares because she loves her kids

    She is calm as a turtle.

 `Hi mum what time is it?`.

Mum you're my favourite person.

   My mum is stunning and splendid.

    My mum is no other than the greatest person in my day,she is all I need in my life.

     If I accidentally smash a piece of glass she would not care.

    I feel safer in my Mum's arms.

Weeping men

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“Wow we should grow these stale trees”said Kevin.

“We can't just leave it like this”said Simon.

“I agree” said Romen.

I wonder how they will do it?

   ’’Does anyone have some sunblock? I am dripping with sweat” said Romen,

“so am I”, said Chris.

”It's like we are slaves” said Simon.                                                                                   They look like they need water,I hope they have

some.Those weeping men look like they stayed up till midnight.Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” “Look here comes the rain” said Tom,

”we need it for hydration and for growing the tall charming trees”, said Kevin.

Those men must have a hard job and must be exhausted

.”These roots must be rotten and crumbly”

.”There's one little thing”said Tom

.”We forgot to make a shelter to just in case we get wet” said Romen.

I hope they have some money for food.                                                                               ”I am blistering hot”said Tom,

“Me too said Kevin.

Doank “look theres some sunblock”explandCris.

You're right said Tom and Kevin

“We need it said Tom.

”Yes we do” explained Romen.

  “When will these trees grow”?said Romen.

”no idea”said Tom and those gardeners were happy and  stayed there for a long time and that folks was the story of weeping men.

Boom

Flames horrify   

                   Hawkes Bay Fire

Huge fire sparks State of emergency

Flames horrify   

Boom!!!!! went the poor house that's burning to the ground.         

My enchanting colorful tall apartment.                   

If they can't live there they will so have to find a new home.

The trees burned like smithereens.

’Where are going now’ said Tom.

 We are going to Wellington.

  It took several splats to take that fire out .

 That fire was not a pleasant one,indeed said mum.

 That fire went crash boom bang.!!!!!!!

Swing Bridge

WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing

I wonder if someone was taking a photo of that rickety old dangerous bridge.It looks like it is an enchanting magnificent rain forest on the other side. What you could smell is fresh air that fills your sense of smell in you nose.You could hear birds chirping out a charming song of splendid nature.I wonder if there might be a family in warm fluffy cozy coats but glacial wind stinging the family’s checks.The family could see one dark eye in one gloomy shadow when the family peered it vanished.So the girl named Cleo went across the old bridge. The mother named Stephanie yelled -don't!!!! the brother Riley stayed in his mother's hands.The father stayed home with the pets Mazy and roosr.It was at rain shower mold rocks.Cleo trusted her mother and came back off the bridge and went home happily ever after singing with joy.