Monday, February 27, 2017

Swing Bridge

WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing

I wonder if someone was taking a photo of that rickety old dangerous bridge.It looks like it is an enchanting magnificent rain forest on the other side. What you could smell is fresh air that fills your sense of smell in you nose.You could hear birds chirping out a charming song of splendid nature.I wonder if there might be a family in warm fluffy cozy coats but glacial wind stinging the family’s checks.The family could see one dark eye in one gloomy shadow when the family peered it vanished.So the girl named Cleo went across the old bridge. The mother named Stephanie yelled -don't!!!! the brother Riley stayed in his mother's hands.The father stayed home with the pets Mazy and roosr.It was at rain shower mold rocks.Cleo trusted her mother and came back off the bridge and went home happily ever after singing with joy.

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