Weeping men

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“Wow we should grow these stale trees”said Kevin.

“We can't just leave it like this”said Simon.

“I agree” said Romen.

I wonder how they will do it?

   ’’Does anyone have some sunblock? I am dripping with sweat” said Romen,

“so am I”, said Chris.

”It's like we are slaves” said Simon.                                                                                   They look like they need water,I hope they have

some.Those weeping men look like they stayed up till midnight.Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” “Look here comes the rain” said Tom,

”we need it for hydration and for growing the tall charming trees”, said Kevin.

Those men must have a hard job and must be exhausted

.”These roots must be rotten and crumbly”

.”There's one little thing”said Tom

.”We forgot to make a shelter to just in case we get wet” said Romen.

I hope they have some money for food.                                                                               ”I am blistering hot”said Tom,

“Me too said Kevin.

Doank “look theres some sunblock”explandCris.

You're right said Tom and Kevin

“We need it said Tom.

”Yes we do” explained Romen.

  “When will these trees grow”?said Romen.

”no idea”said Tom and those gardeners were happy and  stayed there for a long time and that folks was the story of weeping men.